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The Canteen - By LostSheep
Posted On 08/15/2009 23:59:05 by LostSheep


I fall to the sand, too tired and thirsty to carry on. The scorching sun mercilessly beats down on my red, seared back. I scan the horizons of the vast, barren desert, spotting nothing but the rolling hills of dry sand. As I lay on the ground, I hear the noisy droning of desert insects, and the screeching of a buzzard, circling overhead.

“It's over...I give up.” I say to myself in a dry, raspy voice. At that moment, I notice something glimmering in the sunlight, just ten feet away. I gather my strength together, and make my way towards the shining, object. I realize to my excitement that the item is a canteen. I quickly pick it it up, feeling the weight of liquid inside. My heart fills with hope, as I quickly unscrew the lid. As I take off the cap, I spot a label on the side of the flask reading “Warning: Contains Toxic Chemicals DO NOT DRINK.”

“Toxic chemicals?” I ask myself suspiciously. I unscrew the lid off, and bring the opening of the container to my nose. “This is most likely just water.” I say to myself as I bring the canteen to my lips. I stop and reconsider. “What if it is poison?” I ask myself nervously. After a long moment of pondering my situation, I decide that a little bit of the liquid couldn't hurt me...could it? I take a small sip from the flask, and swallow.

“This tastes like water to me.” I think. I quickly drink down the rest of the liquid, not wasting a drop. Immediately, a sharp pain strikes my stomach. I fall to the ground, clutching my gut. Waves of nausea wash over me. I hear a loud rumble across the desert sky. My vision begins to fade to black, as I wallow in pain in the sand. As I feel my life slip away, the last thing I feel is cold raindrop hitting my sunburned back.



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From: dazed-and-confused
10/13/2009 20:37:40

THAT was good.......you have a talent for painting with words...good for you.


no need to ask what the canteen held........for each of us, it is different......yet, the outcome feels the same for us all.


 


and yet, we are still here, hurt, bruised, bleeding...sick as a dog......but not yet dead.....and there is rain...from above.


 


it is so difficult to escape from the cycle of self-destruction.....and peace and salvation are right there....just reach out for it.....but that can be so hard....afterall, who do we think we are that WE might be saved....right?


 


now, THAT is destructive arrogance.......thinking we are to special to receive salvation.



think about it.



From: lost87
08/18/2009 18:38:02

I love both this story and the red post....amazing. very aptly describes what i am feeling!



From: Hemidakota
08/18/2009 10:57:33

Interesting story



From: WmLee
08/17/2009 10:06:39

Lost ~ U've got a way with telling a story.  I can see somany ways that applies to life, temptations, warnings from our prophets, warnings from personal revelation . . . . .  Good job my friend!



From: goodfeeling_
08/17/2009 07:58:58

So often, it seems, that thats how life operates.  A tease, to hook you in, then you bite.  Only to have waited one more moment.  I think sometimes the Gods are laughing at us, as we fall for their tricks every single time.  Good story Lost.  I enjoyed it.


Good.



From: not_ashamed
08/16/2009 14:15:51

wow lost, that was a great blog. Thanks for sharing it





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