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The Dark Woods
Posted On 10/13/2009 14:57:33 by LostSheep

The Dark Woods

By LostSheep


Lost in the woods

I ramble about,

Wondering how

I'm gonna get out


The trees tower high,

obstructing my view.

The forest's thick branches

let little light through.


I've been here for years.

As I try to depart,

I feel these dark woods

corrupting my heart.


As I look for a way

to broaden my scope,

I see a climbable tree,

and my heart fills with hope


If I could just get

to the top of this tree,

I'd know where to go,

Then I could be free.


As I climb the tall tree,

I give it my best.

About half way up,

I stop there to rest


I cling to the trunk,

overcome with great fear.

Surely I'm better off lost

than up here.


As I descend to the ground,

I make a mistake.

The branch that I stand on,

I hear start to break.


With no time to react

I feel the branch give.

As I fall to the ground

I pray that I'll live.


I fall down ten feet

as I hit the hard dirt.

I lay there discouraged

Hopeless and hurt


In the dark woods

I continue to roam,

wondering to myself

if I'll ever get home




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From: WmLee
10/13/2009 21:12:42

Lost ~ very nice! But, dark woods, like walnut and mahogany, are hard woods.  They don't break easy.  So, perhaps it was old wood, perhaps the weight was more than even hard, thick, dark wood can bear.  so let's look at this for a second.


Why did you pick an old tree?  Was it because it had grown higher and would perhaps give you a better view?  Perhaps you felt safe with old wood.  Should I ask about a father figure here?


Why do you think, in this poem, the branch broke?  Do you feel heavy?  Think yourself to be . . . chunky?  Or, perhaps you feel like you carry a great burden on your shoulders and that is what made you, heavy.


You have opened up here and I am proud of that.  let's talk more tomorrow.


(well written and thank you for sharing)



From: dazed-and-confused
10/13/2009 20:27:10

that is a great poem, sheep.


i want to point out, that it was your fear of climbing higher that made you go back (where things were familiar, albeit, painful) that made you go back and then fall.


 


see any patterns here?



From: not_ashamed
10/13/2009 17:37:40

Very nice lost....... I love it





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