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Old 11-18-2008, 11:57 AM
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I'm just new to the Church, but I think this is an idea worth looking at. I know I would love to live in the "State of Deseret", as Utah and much of the West used to be called.

Your website is inviting and looks professionally done, but you do need a proof-reader. On this page, "Recognition Movement", I found a couple errors in the text, Nation of Deseret: Online Government Interface

For example, you cannot say "not many people no of it", and be taken seriously.

Probably this is just a typing error, so you really do need a proof-reader. If I become a "citizen", I will volunteer!

Are the current members mostly in Utah? I live in Cottonwood Hgts.

Hope to learn more about this "Nation of Deseret" through this forum!
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