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Old 11-18-2008, 12:11 PM
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Originally Posted by Bethie View Post
I'm just new to the Church, but I think this is an idea worth looking at. I know I would love to live in the "State of Deseret", as Utah and much of the West used to be called.

Your website is inviting and looks professionally done, but you do need a proof-reader. On this page, "Recognition Movement", I found a couple errors in the text, Nation of Deseret: Online Government Interface

For example, you cannot say "not many people no of it", and be taken seriously.

Probably this is just a typing error, so you really do need a proof-reader.
Thank you from bringing that to my attention. I will correct them in my next update. There's always a few little spelling buggers the get past.

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If I become a "citizen", I will volunteer!
You are more than welcome.

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Are the current members mostly in Utah? I live in Cottonwood Hgts.
Most members live in Idaho. Our focus area is Idaho, Utah, Northern Arizona, and Eastern Nevada. But anyone from anywhere is welcome.

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Hope to learn more about this "Nation of Deseret" through this forum!
I'll invite our Standing Chairman, hopefully we can have a good productive discussion.
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